Last week I got feedback on my third article for my dissertation and my promotor gave me some tips to rewrite my introduction(See blog of 10 december). I also read the article of Adam grant about writing an introduction: setting the hook Grant 2011 Introduction guidelines article
This week I wrote a new introduction using this feedback. If you want to you can read it and perhaps share some comments with me by emailing me at m.haring@hva.nl